Legend of Zelda Doujinshi Project seeking proofreaders!

[sagesaria]

Hear ye, hear ye!

The project that evenshadowscry and I are working on, the Legend of Zelda Doujinshi, needs some people to help out in the editing department before it goes off to be drawn. Damien, obviously, and also rinichan are selected to help, since they're involved in the project already, and I need help from 3 more people. First come, first serve, so if you're interested, speak now.

Rules:
1. Any information about the story is confidential; no sharing it with other Zelda fans. They have to wait until the drawings come out.
2. Please have some knowledge of Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time, or at least enough to follow the story. Or at least ask questions if you want to help but don't know much.
3. I'm not too worried about some of the word choice in the descriptions and such; those are just to help Damien draw. What I'm worried about is what the readers of the finished comic are gonna see. Keep that in mind.
4. PLEASE be honest. I don't mind when people say that it's good, but please please PLEASE give more information than that; what did you like? What can I change? What should I elaborate on? If something can be improved, tell me what you think I can do.

If you're interested, please reply and you will be added to a new group of friends: Peer Evaluators.

EDIT: Ok, I stretched it a bit since so many kindly people volunteered at once (at least to me :P). But anyway, I changed it to six slots, all filled now. If I decide later that I need more, there will be more, but this will do very nicely. Thank you so much to the people who made it in.

To begin your part in this project, add me to your friends list. I'm adding you all to my own, and you will be added to the proofreader filter. The first chapter shall be posted tonight or tomorrow. Thank you all very much in advance!

Slots:
1. sushiboy
2. dutchwaffle
3. supermario_x
4. bugdomqueen
5. flamingrivers
6. cptjacksparrow

In other news, I just found out that Singing Mountain, a song composed for Chrono Trigger but was never used, *IS* on my soundtrack CDs! It's just very well hidden. But I have it!!! SQUEE!

Comments

[sushiboy.livejournal.com]

hey I want innn

[sagesaria.livejournal.com]

yay #1!

Welcome aboard! I'm going to add you to my friends list and put you on the Peer Evaluators filter. You should add me if you haven't already. The first chapter should be up soon within the week, so stay tuned.

[supermario-x.livejournal.com]

hmmm. what else is invloved in the Editing Department?

Could you describe in more detail in what i'd have to do?

[sagesaria.livejournal.com]

basically, evenshadowscry and I are working on this comic together. We both came up with the story (mostly inspired by what Shadow (AKA DAmien) wrote ages ago), I'm writing, he's drawing. But me being a picky, anal-retentive writer, I always see doubt in what I write. Some stuff I'll love, the rest I'll be worried will come out wrong; too rushed, too unbelievable, too confusing, etc. What I need is feedback; anything that could be improved in dialogue or actions. rinichan usually helps me with my writing, but she's a little hard to reach, and last time I talked to Damien, he just shrugged and said "You're the writer." All I really need is comments and sudjestions. Probably a few times with the same part of the story; I edit a LOT when given feedback.

[supermario-x.livejournal.com]

hmm feedback huh?

then count me in.

XD

[sagesaria.livejournal.com]

Thanks a bunch ^__^

[dutchwaffle.livejournal.com]

I can help if needed.

[sagesaria.livejournal.com]

Alrighty! #2

Welcome aboard! I'm going to add you to my friends list and put you on the Peer Evaluators filter. You should add me if you haven't already. The first chapter should be up soon within the week, so stay tuned.

[sagesaria.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much.

Everyone's listed above!

[flamingrivers.livejournal.com]

I want in I want in!!!!

[sagesaria.livejournal.com]

Welcome aboard!

Everything's above.

[flamingrivers.livejournal.com]

P.S. I find your icon very realistic.
I write stories and such and when I get stuck I play minesweeper and solitare.

[cptjacksparrow.livejournal.com]

umm I think i'm in. If needed.

[sagesaria.livejournal.com]

Yay! Thank you so much!

All you need to know is up there *points to post* ^__^

[rinichan.livejournal.com]

Sorry for making you outsource feedback. :(
Looking at the number of people, I think it would be easiest as locked posts on fangirlspwn, or maybe a mailing list. How were you thinking of doing it?

[sagesaria.livejournal.com]

if they're on the custom friends group, they'll be the only ones who can see it when I post it.

*prod* oi! Email me! I sent the chapter to you already!